tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-52093624386815765.post4146774634162217471..comments2023-10-26T02:39:21.402-08:00Comments on Life With A Twist of Beth: Family Crucibles: A PaperBetherdhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02398691516528206368noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-52093624386815765.post-87426214968155192582009-04-17T05:56:00.000-08:002009-04-17T05:56:00.000-08:00Beth, this is excellent. I have no problem seein...Beth, this is excellent. I have no problem seeing why you got a good grade. I may be colored a bit by personal involvement in the story, but the paper has good organization, the transitions are smooth. For the most part, all the filler words have been edited out. Good job.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com